Original Series: CROSE

[destinymaker]

Episode Time: 1 Hour

QUOTE:
" Many years ago, the great British explorer Geogre Mallory who was to die on Mount Everest was asked Why did he want to climb it? He said because it is there, well space is there and the Moon and the Planets are there and new hopes for knowledge and peace are there. And therefore as we set sail, we ask God's blessing on the most hazardous and dangerous and greatest adventure in which man has ever embarked..."
- John F. Kennedy

Story: In 2402, Earth's new enemy now know us in and out, after discovering our radio and television tranmissions. The enemy is human in apperance and can blend in with us. They are the Xlean. The year is 2477, and the Earth and the United States are still around. The crew of the Carrier Ambitious are ordered to export the political activist Qli Grilo from the planet Chrysalis to the prison Basis. This Qli Grilo is being held for causing riots on the planet Chrysalis. On the way of escorting him though United Coalition of Nations' terrotory, a Xlean ship jumps the Ambitious. Not before they make a blind jump. They end up stranned by a planet very similar to Earth with 5 Moons called Crose.

[destinymaker]

This series is based around a World War Two type war and I have my own take on the Garden of Eden, Noah's Ark and Atlantis. They will be a major part of this series.

[Esquin]

So is your series about a war between earth and this planet, or these Xleans being stuck on this planet called Crose? Im a little confused there.

[destinymaker]

Crose was accidently discovered and the Xlean and the Earth are at war. The only reason that I put them in was to have a reason to get sent them.

[Esquin]

Your plot still seems very mismatched. Someone gets stuck on Crose and personally I have no idea who it is. It's like you've tried to combine 2 stories into one.