Discussion thread for episode "the torch"

[immhotep]

"The Torch"

The alliance are our hosts and the bounds of human nature become our chains, prepare to enter a new realm of power, but be prepared for an initiation.

Written by Patricia Steward & Robert Richardson

The Ark's crew are set to punished for the events in "Crossroads" however Daniel Jackson persuades the powers that be to give them another chance, a group is selected, and the stage set. In trials to test, integrity, Honor and wisdom ; Lester, Daniel, Lee and Elliot must face up to their pasts and prove themselves worthy to be the crew of the finest ship in the history of the great alliance.


This episode is really special for me, cos its the first one Ive had a part in writing. its also the first proper alliance episode, its a good character development ep and first and foremost introduces the FURLINGS! well our versions of them, we hope you like them

[Wineblood]

It was good, however there still are a few bad points.

I liked how the whole "things from your past" was introduced and used to get to know the characters a bit better. Also, it's nice to finally know that there's a purpose behind the show. There's a reason for all this.

On the bad side of things, still a few weird spellings. WORST of all was Lester saying "math". That killed me. The only other thing that was annoying was the end. Most of it was pure description for a few pages and it did get a bit hard to follow.

[NoDot]

Well, either I'm not noticing them, or the spelling/grammer just got a lot better.

Further comments pending...