|
|
Post by Elite Anubis Guard on Feb 1, 2006 13:04:48 GMT -5
Release Date: Tue 31 Jan 06 Episode Number: 1x04 Episode Title: Behemoth Original Airdate: 01/02/2006 Story by: Adrian Curtis and Geoff Hill Written by: Adrian Curtis An F-308 patrol returns under fire to the Destiny, which is in orbit of a nearby planet, after encountering a massive vessel in the middle of the sector. Soon, the same vessel attacks the Destiny, and the ship is forced to flee into the system's asteroid field, where she is disabled, with the massive vessel bearing down on her. sg-universe.net/sgd/s1/#104I'd like to appologise. Our website has been acting up recently. I've uploaded the episode onto SG Universe, until the problem be fixed. |
|
|
|
Post by Elite Anubis Guard on Feb 1, 2006 13:18:30 GMT -5
|
|
|
|
Post by Geoff on Feb 2, 2006 9:31:39 GMT -5
Anyone looked at it?
|
|
|
|
Post by Valórin on Feb 2, 2006 18:07:56 GMT -5
Great episode  That is one scary ship! |
|
|
|
Post by Geoff on Feb 3, 2006 9:29:43 GMT -5
Hmmm.
|
|
|
|
Post by Elite Anubis Guard on Feb 3, 2006 12:14:46 GMT -5
Here is Monster Zero's reply on MZP:
Another good episode - we're keeping the Malecalthi as a relatively unknown threat and that makes them more dangerous - all we know is that they obviously work to clones of soldiers and ships to swarm the enemy, and with the Destiny more an exploration than a combat ship, that's going to make life pretty tricky!
Good little plan to take out the cruiser, too - it made sense and used the rules of the SG universe well to pull it off without feeling contrived at all.
Bad points - a lot of grammatical and formatting mistakes in this one. Punctuation was all over the place for the entire script, and that detracts from the reading even though the story itself was solid. Plus, at 76 pages this is still too long for the hour-TV format you're aiming for. If this was being filmed, every episode would end up being a double-length one, basically!
|
|
NoDot
Jaffa Guard
E.P. of SV-30 and SGFut (if they come out)
Posts: 197
|
Post by NoDot on Feb 4, 2006 12:49:27 GMT -5
So, the Onslaught Cruiser has engines the size of the Destiny, which is twice as big as the Prometheus, which is about the size of a Goa'uld Ha'tak in diameter?
That makes it bigger than my Zu-Kot! Now I'm scared.
BTW: Page 37: "project the Destiny"?
|
|
|
|
Post by Elite Anubis Guard on Feb 4, 2006 13:26:07 GMT -5
protect.
|
|
|
|
Post by Esquin on Feb 4, 2006 23:38:49 GMT -5
The MZP comments were nice, My spelling and gramemr were an issue and I will deffinnently be working to improve on those in the future. After my next script, episode 106 is complete i'll consider working on some "making of" episodes for both scripts.
|
|
|
|
Post by Elite Anubis Guard on Feb 5, 2006 5:54:04 GMT -5
Well we now have a proof reader and this'll be the first one he's going over, so look out for the new version soon.
|
|
NoDot
Jaffa Guard
E.P. of SV-30 and SGFut (if they come out)
Posts: 197
|
Post by NoDot on Feb 5, 2006 19:06:59 GMT -5
Gee, I couldn't guess that. >_> I was pointing out a slightly silly spelling error. |
|
|
|
Post by Geoff on Feb 5, 2006 23:56:01 GMT -5
So, the Onslaught Cruiser has engines the size of the Destiny, which is twice as big as the Prometheus, which is about the size of a Goa'uld Ha'tak in diameter? That makes it bigger than my Zu-Kot! Now I'm scared. Yes, just think how much fuel that thing would burn. And, what's a Zu-Kot? Sorry, I got into sci fi late. |
|
|
|
Post by Elite Anubis Guard on Feb 6, 2006 2:42:09 GMT -5
I think it's something from his series.
|
|
|
|
Post by Geoff on Feb 6, 2006 9:41:35 GMT -5
Ah.
I dont know, I just the love the idea of the OC, so mammoth, so powerful. In 104, we only saw the tip of the iceberg of what these things can do.
|
|
|
|
Post by Elite Anubis Guard on Feb 6, 2006 11:16:28 GMT -5
We get more hints in 106 right?
|
|
